How many time do you spend with your parents? 1.___________
Your parents are your dearer people in the world 2.___________
when you are young. And they always care of you 3.___________
deep. But even though many children still love their 4.___________
mum and dad, families may become more close 5.___________
as you get older. The end of the year is a time for 6.___________
families to get together. Have you ever thought of 7.___________
how you can show your parents that you love them? 8.___________
Find a chance and do something for them or to have 9.___________
sincere talk with them. If you can do this, your parents 10.___________
will be very happy.
1. 将many改为much。修饰不可数名词(time)不能用many。
2. 将dearer改为dearest。与in the world连用，用最高级。
3. 将of改为for。care for sb.=" love" sb.爱某人。
4. 将deep改deeply为。表示抽象意义“深深地”，用deeply。
5. 将more改为less。由even though和still可知，小孩随着年龄增大，与父母的关系可能变得不及以前亲密。
6. 将you改为they。因为是代替上文的many children。
7. 去掉of。think of后面常接sth.或doing sth.，不接从句。
8. 此行正确。
9. 去掉to。have与前面的find并列，均为祈使句。
10. 在sincere前加上a。have a talk with sb是固定词组。
同上