Lucy was one of my best friend at high school. At that time, we often spend time together. Thank to her help, I made great progresses in my study. Last year, she decided to study abroad. In other words, we would be separated for long time. Before she was left, I prepared a gift to show my best wishes to him. She said it was a best gift she has ever had. From then on, we’ve kept in touch with each other through e-mail. I look forward to see her again in the near future.
小题1:friend----friends
小题2:spend----spent
小题3:thank----thanks
小题4:progresses—progress
小题5:for^ a
小题6:删去was
小题7:him—her
小题8:A--- the
小题9:Has—had
小题10:See---seeing
题目分析：
小题1:one of 后面接名词复数：friend----friends
小题2:时间是At that time spend-所以用过去时spent
小题3:考查词组：thanks to多亏了
小题4:progress是不可数名词，不能用复数
小题5:for a long time一段很长时间
小题6:leave做“离开”讲是不及物动词，不能用被动，删去was
小题7:用her代替Lucy
小题8:修饰最高级用 the
小题9:主句是She said从句用过去完成时had done
小题10:look forward to doing渴望做…., seeing
点评：本题考查较为细致，要求考生要特别耐心答题中注意句子中人称和数是否一致，时态是否一致。各种词性之间的区别以及一些常用句型，固定短语的应用。一般的这类题型不会出现太复杂的单词和句子，这类题型考察基础知识较多。平时应注重积累，熟记一些句型及惯用结构。修改前先细读短文，标出出错的位置，改完以后还得细读短文，看看改过后的短文是否语意通顺，符合逻辑。