你的学校生活怎么样? 请结合提示词以“My School Life”为题写一篇60词左右的短文,介绍你的学校生活。
提示词:interesting, subject, favorite, friend, playground, outdoor, activity, library
My School Life
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One possible version
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My School Life
My school life is very interesting. We begin our classes at 8 o'clock in the morning. I have four classes
in the morning and two in the afternoon. We study Chinese, math, English, history and some other subjects.
My favorite subject is history. It's easy and interesting. I often talk about it with my classmates. They are
friendly to me. After school we do outdoor activities on the playground or read books in the library. I like
my school life a lot.
题目分析:
这是一篇给材料作文,介绍我的学校生活。结合所给材料,可知本文主要考查一般现在时态,人称为第一人称,注意主谓一致问题,句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构。注意一些常见句式的应用,比如:We begin our classes......;We study......;My favorite subject is ......及I like ......等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词,注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系。
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,语言简练。开头介绍了我在学校学习的科目,接下来介绍和同学的相处情况,最后指出我喜欢学校生活。此处用了have four classes, talk about , After school, on the playground等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。