I have a good friend named Helen. She is tall and slim. She has a square face and smiling eyes. She has long hair.

Helen has a good sense of humour. I can tell her anything because she can keep a secret. She is also helpful. She often helps us with our homework. She likes reading. She reads/ read the most books in this year’s Reading Week. She likes travelling as well. Last Sunday, she with her parents went to the World Park by coach.

Helen is always willing to help others, so she would like to be a social worker when she grows up.

题目分析:

这是一篇给材料作文。给出的材料比较详细，我们所要做的首先是应用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。写作前先结合要表达的事情确定句子的人称时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。

点评：注意写作中的时态、人称和数的问题，时态一般是一般现在时态，人称是单数第三人称较多。写作中语言要准确、简明，说明有条理，符合逻辑。