问题
写作题
请你以My pen friend 为题，写一篇短文，向同学介绍你的笔友。
1. 用词规范， 语法正确。 2. 句意通顺，要点齐全。 3. 可适当增加细节。 4. 不少于60词。 | ||||||||||||||||
答案
My pen friend is Lisa.She is thirtheen years old..She’s from New York,the US.Now,she studies in No.3 Middle School.She is hard-working. All the teachers like her.
I have a photo of her. She has long hairand she is tall and thin. I think she is very pretty.Of all the colors, she likes bule best. So do I . Besides,she likes resding,swimming,and playing chess.
Now Lisa and I are good friends.
题目分析：这是一篇图表式作文。主要是人物介绍。提供的信息很详细：年龄，地址，爱好，学校。写作时注意动词的第三人称单数。主要时态是一般现在时。
【亮点说明】初级学生能合理发挥，适当增加细节很是不错。在文中还用到了新颖的句式更使文章富有逻辑性。如：Of all the colors，So do I，Besides。提醒学生在平时要多记多背一些短语和句子。