下面表格为某市2006年与2013年人们度假方式的情况比较。请依照表格内容，写一篇英语短文，对度假方式的变化进行简要的评析。 要求：1. 语言表达准确，短文连贯通顺；词数80--100；2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3. 80词左右。
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One possible version
The way people spend their holidays has changed a lot from 2006 to 2013. More people choose to travel abroad now, because their income has increased. They can afford the journeys abroad. As we know, the seaside is a good place for people to spend their holidays. But the rate has dropped by 7% during the past seven years because the sea is being polluted. The dirty water drives many visitors away. However, the number of the people who go climbing and camping is increasing. Why? Because more and more people want t get close to nature.
题目分析：这是一篇利用图表的给材料作文。要求对比介绍人们的度假方式。主要用到过去时态和一般现在时。
【亮点说明】这篇短文能正确的使用时态，能合理的使用连词使文章更有逻辑性，富有条理。用了一些短语和固定句式如: More people choose to travel abroad now, because their income has increased. The dirty water drives many visitors away.等，短文用了一些连词如：because、but等。使句子结构更加复杂化。