问题 写作题

作文

撇和捺互相支持就成了“人”,在人生的历程中常常离不了他人的支撑。在风平浪静的时候,常需要有人倾诉;在急风骇浪的时候,常需要有人帮扶。学习的困惑需要有人的指点,是生活的艰辛需要有人的支撑,是思想的贫乏需要有人的浇灌,是心灵的苍白需要有人的丰富……在时间的流逝中,总有人是你最想依靠的。

请以“我最想依靠的就是你—________”为题写一篇文章。

要求:(1)将题目补充完整;

(2)字数不少于600字。

(3)写真事,诉真情,内容完整,字迹清晰。

(4)文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。

答案

题目分析:这是一篇典型的写人类文章。通过审读提示语,可以看出,题目中的“你”指的是人,而且是考生熟悉的,甚至对自己产生过很大影响,或给予自己很大帮助的人。所以,这个“你”一定要是现实中的人物,不能把“你”写成“历史人物”,或者写成虚幻的人甚至是物。同时,题目要求写“你”,对象应该是唯一的,而不能把“你”写成“你们”。否则,就跑题了。另外,题目中的“依靠”,指示考生所选对象和所选材料必须在“我”的成长中起过十分重要的、不可替代的作用,给“我”留下深刻印象。因此要紧扣“依靠”选材用材。

所以,选材要围绕具体的生活场景,写自己曾经有过,或亟待改变的生存形态,或是令人难忘的故事,或是令人感慨的激动,或是令人动情的追忆,或是情感深刻的反思。在写人的过程中,要注意运用语言描写、动作描写和心理描写等方法,突出人物的个性,还要能够同“记事”结合起来,既见事,又见人,努力表现“事在人为”。最后,要注意学家会以情动人。只有那些真正写出了真情实感的作文,才能打动别人。

点评:半命题作文留一半精彩给自己,考生要巧妙利用这一点,在第一时间就能展现自己的文学素养和写作水平,吸引阅卷者的视线。补好文题是关键,要充分吸取题目中的隐含信息,要尽力调动自己的生活积累,要精心体现运思的新颖独到,写最能引发自己感情的来写。

完形填空
For years I wanted a flower garden. I’d spend hours   31  different things I could plant. I believe they would look nice together.
But then we had Mattew. And Marvin. And the twins, Alisa and Alan. And then Helen. Five children! I was too   32   raising them的grow a garden.
Money was tight(拮据),as well as time. Often when my children were little, one of them would want something expensive. And I’d have to say, "Do you see a money tree outside? Money doesn’t    33   on trees, you know."
34  , all five got through high school and college(大学)and were off on their own. I started thinking again about having a garden. Then, one morning on Mother’s Day, I was working in my kitchen. Suddenly, I looked out of the window and there was a   35  tree, planted right in my garden. I thought it   36   be a weeping willow(垂柳),because I saw things    37   around on all its branches(树枝).Then I put my  38   on and I couldn’t believe what I saw. There was a money tree in my garden!
I went outside to have a look. It was    39   ! There were dollar bills all over that tree. There was also a note in the tree. It    40   ,"We all love you, Mom."
小题1:A-talking about    B. thinking of     C. preparing for       D. looking after
小题2:
A.tiredB.carelessC.busyD.poor
小题3:
A.growB.makeC.comeD.get
小题4:
A.ClearlyB.NaturallyC.CertainlyD.Finally
小题5:
A.moneyB.newC.youngD.tall
小题6:
A.shouldB.canC.mustD.need
小题7:
A.blowingB.turningC.producingD.appearing
小题8:
A.overcoatB.hatC.shoesD.glasses
小题9:
A.strangeB.trueC.specialD.perfect
小题10:
A.saysB.writesC.showsD.describes
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