语言综合运用。
眼睛是心灵的窗户，它可以表达丰富的感情，或喜悦，或忧伤，或温柔，或愤怒，或纯真，或迷离，……生活中也许有那么一双让你难忘的眼睛，请你用动情的笔墨把它描绘出来。
（1）以“眼睛”为描写中心。
（2）运用比喻和排比的修辞手法。
（3）结构相对完整，语言准确、鲜明、生动。
（4）不少于200字。
题目分析：在这次小作文要求中，最重要的整体性的要求是“以眼睛为描写中心，运用比喻和排比的修辞手法。”。因此从表达方式上看，应该是以描写为主。比喻和排比的修辞手法要求很简单，平常都有练习。要做到“以眼睛为描写中心”，就一定要处理好个体的差异和整体的共性的关系。很多同学觉得单写眼睛用描写的手法似乎很难，三两句就没了。一个很重要的原因是因为他没有把他写的“眼睛”看作是独一无二的特定的某个个体，他习惯于从“眼睛”的共性上去思考去下笔，笔下流出的是议论抒情乃至说明，就是不是描写了。有些同学就做得很好，比如，他就只去写林黛玉的或项羽的或妈妈的或某个同学的。
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| My friend had mentioned that her father had a lot of children's toys that he was looking to give away. She knew I had a three-year-old daughter so she thought of me first. I told her I would 1 it if I could get some nice things for my daughter, which I wouldn't otherwise have been able to 2 . When I met her father, he began to explain that he was 3 once too and that he would hate to 4 things that could be very 5 . At first, he thought of taking everything to the Salvation Army but then he 6 to see if anyone he knew could use them first. When he was 7 me around, I saw a bed, a slide (滑板), a kitchen set and many other things that made me surprised. As my eyes were wide and beginning to tear up a bit, he told me not to feel guilty. He said I was 8 him by getting rid of them. As I was looking around, I did feel guilty, but I tried to remain more grateful than guilty because he told me to. Every time I tried to 9 him for giving my daughter all these 10 things, he would thank me right back and was grateful that these toys would be put to good use. So, sometimes when we are helped by others, the others that helped us are helped as a side-effect. In the 11 of charity, it makes sense to feel grateful, but guilt is just as normal, I know we could have lived without a slide, which is why I do feel guilty, but I am grateful all the same because my daughter 12 enjoys all these nice things! | ||||
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