The English Corner in Zhongshan Park is where people 1.___________
go to practise their speaking English. Every Sunday afternoon 2.___________
they gather around, talk to each other in English. Among 3.___________
they are students, teachers, doctors, and so on. I first went to an 4.___________
English Corner when I was in Junior Grade Two. I went there on 5.___________
every Sunday and chat with some people in English. In the 6.___________
past three years I had never been absent. I’m sure I’ve made 7.___________
some progresses in my listening and speaking. And I have 8.___________
made many friends there. The English Comer is really good 9.___________
place. I hope that more friends will join in us. 10.___________
1. 此行无错。
2. 把 speaking 改为 spoken。“英语口语”是 spoken English。
3. 把 talk 改为 talking。用现在分词作伴随状语。
4. 把 they 改为 them。人称代词作介词 among 的宾语，因此要用宾格。这是个倒装句，among them 是表语，主语是students, teachers…。
5. 去掉 on。在every Sunday /week/ day 之类的时间状语前，不用介词。
6. 把 chat 改为 chatted。chatted 与 went 并列，指最初去英语角的情况。
7. 把had改为have。因为in the past/last few years常与现在完成时连用。
8. 把progresses改为progress。因为 progress 是不可数名词，没有复数形式。
9. 在is后加上a。后面的place是单数可数名词。
10. 去掉join后面的in。join in是指参加某项活动(即以表示活动的名词用其宾语)；表示加入到某个组织并成为其中的一员，或与某人一起，要用join。
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