One day Daddy and I was going for a walk around the 1.
lake while a girl rode past us quickly. Suddenly we heard 2.
a cry for a help. The girl had fallen into the lake with her 3.
bike. Daddy and I ran quickly towards her. We manage 4.
to pull her out the water. Then the girl asked us if we could 5.
help getting the bike out of the water. Then the girl asked 6.
us if we could help get the bike out of the lake. Daddy was 7.
only too ready to help him. When we pulled her bike out， 8.
she rode away even with saying “ Thanks ” to us. 9.
I felt quite disappointing at her deed. 10.
1.was 改为were
2. while 改为when
3.去掉a
4. manage 改为managed
5. out 后加of
6. getting 改为get
7. 正确
8. him改为her
9. with 改为without
10. disappointing 改为disappointed
1. 主语是“Daddy and I”，所以动词要用复数
2. 本句用到be doing…when 短语
3．Help前面a多余
4. 时态应该前后一致
5. pull out of
6. help do sth “帮助多某事”
7. 正确
8. 人称应该一致，指前面提到的女孩
9. 表示否定
10. 应该为形容词形式
