I can’t swim because I have a strong fear of water. Look back 1. ________
my childhood experiences, I think that three reasons might 2. ________
explain the fear. The first reason is that I was not allow to go 3. ________
near the water when I was a child, for my mother had a 4. ________
unreasonable fear of it. So, even as a child that I was taught to 5. ________
see the water as something danger. Second, my eyes 6. ________
became bad when I was five. If I took off my glass in the 7. ________
water, I couldn’t see anything, or this increased my fear. 8. ________
The worst part of my experience is that as a child I saw 9. ________
a neighbor drowned. After then I have been more frightened. 10. ________
1. Look→ Looking
2. my前面加on / upon
3. allow→ allowed
4. 第二个a→ an
5. 去掉that
6. danger→ dangerous
7. glass→ glasses
8. or→ so
9. 本行无错
10. After→ Since
1. 此处应该用现在分词作状语
2. look back on / upon是固定短语,意为“回顾”
3. 此处应该用被动语态。
4. unreasonable fear是以元音音素开头,故用不定冠词an
5. 此句是简单句,that是多余用词
6. 形容词修饰复合不定代词
7. 复数名词glasses意为“眼镜”
8. 此处表达因果关系
9. 本行无错
10. 介词短语since then常与现在完成时态连用。