When I first learned to write in English, I ran into many 76. ________
difficulties. The main problem was in that I always thought 77. ________
in Chinese and tried to translate anything into English. 78. ________
My teacher advised me to keep my diary. I followed her 79. ________
advice and should put down 100 words or so each day. 80. ________
Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was 81. ________
learning to express me in simple English. One day I wrote 82. ________
a little story and showed to my teacher. She liked it 83. ________
very much and reads it to the class. All said the story was 84. ________
a good one. Their word were a great encouragement to me. 85. ________
76.√
77.去掉in。
78.anything→everything
79.my→a。
80.删去should。
81.talk→talking。
82.me→myself。
83.showed后加it。
84.reads→read。
85.word→words。
76.√
77.去掉in。in不与that连用，that引导表语从句。
78.anything→everything。根据前面作者说要把用汉语想好的全都译成英语，anything用于肯定句时指任一(个)。
79.my→a。keep a diary“记日记”是约定俗成的说法。
80.删去should。此处should是赘语，应去掉。
81.talk→talking。应是enjoy doing。
82.me→myself。汉语“自己表达”用英语是express oneself。
83.showed后加it。“给某人看……”应用show sth to sb。代词it 放在showed和to 中间。
84.reads→read。该文以过去时态为背景，所以reads应改为read。
85.word→words。不是一个人说，所以word应用复数。