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第 Ⅱ 卷(共35分)

第四部分写作(共两节，满分35分)

第一节短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)

此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断，如无错误，在该行右边的横线上画一个勾()；如果有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：

此行多一词：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。

此行缺一词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。

此行错一词：在错词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

注意：原行没有错的不要改。

When people think about precious things, they usually                                  

think about money or jewelry. I am not very rich, and I have                          76. ___________      

something very preciously in my room. It’s not a CD player or                       77. ___________      

a cellphone. It's the view from my window. I’m lucky live                             78. ___________      

near a park. My window faces with the tops of the trees in                              79. ___________      

the park. Below the tree I can see children on the playground,                         80. ___________      

young couples walked quietly, mothers with children, and                              81. ___________      

old people sitting on the beach. The whole world is before                              82. ___________      

their eyes. My classmates like to go online or listen to music,                          83. ___________      

but when I have a free time, I just sit on the chair and                                    84. ___________      

enjoyed the most precious thing in my room: the view.                                  85. ___________