Dear Lily,
I got your letter and pleased to hear about your job interview at a grocery store. I know you want to get a job at the TV station, and you’ve been looking for several week now and haven’t found something. The job at the grocery store doesn’t sound badly. If I am you, I’d take it. If you worked there for some time, you could earn some money. Its your decision, of course, but I advise you to take it. Let me to know what you decided to do. By the way, after you get the job you can think about get a bike later.
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