假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号( ∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不记分。
One afternoon after I was on my way home,the weather changed suddenly.Dark clouds were gathered.I began to feel worried because I didn’t have both a raincoat or umbrella about me.It soon started to rain. Just as 1 was hurrying home, I heard of someone calling me from behind.I turn to have a look and found that he
was Liu Wei, a good neighbor of mine.He offered to share his umbrella with me.We walked all the ways home.With Liu Wei’s help, I would have got wet to the skin.How thankful 1 was to his help!
小题1:after改为 when
小题2:gathered改为 gathering
小题3:both 改为either;
小题4:umbrella前加 an 去掉 of
小题5:turn 改为turned
小题6:he改为 it
小题7:ways 改为way
小题8:With改为 Without
小题9:to 改为 for
小题1:when引导时间状语从句,当…时候
小题2:乌云在聚集是主动式:gathered改为 gathering
小题3:后面是:a raincoat 说明不是两者都both,而是两者任何一个, either;
小题4:umbrella是可数名词前加 an
小题5:听见某人做什么:hear sb doing,去掉 of
小题6:考查时态,这篇文章用过去时,turn 改为turned
小题7:表示不确定的人用it,he改为 it
小题8:all the way home回家的路上
小题9:考查介词:意为:没有刘磊的帮助,我们就会湿透了。With改为 Without
小题10:考查介词:be thankful for对…感激,to 改为 for