短文改错（满分10分）

下面短文中有10处语法错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,并在其下面写上该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意：①每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

②只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。

I appreciate your help very well. On the first day of Camp, you came up to myself while I was sitting alone. After that, you always gave me specially attention and inspire me to join in activities. As a result, I gradually got to know the other campers. Because the help you gave me that summer, my life changed. I gained so much confidences that I went back to school as a new person. My grades improved. I became very active but made new friends. Today, I got a letter what said I had been admitting to a college. I am so proud of myself. I just want to thank you for helping me become a different person.