问题 改错题

修改病句,并指出病因。

1.小刚和小亮是一对好朋友,他经常在学习上帮助他。

                                                                                                

      病因:                                                                               

2.我们鼓号队员神气活现地站在校门口吹号敲鼓。

                                                                                                 

      病因:                                                                                

3.菜园里种着黄瓜、西瓜、扁豆、茄子等各种蔬菜。

                                                                                                  

      病因:                                                                                  

4.雨点像一个个铁球落下来,砸得房顶上劈劈啪啪地响。

                                                                                                   

      病因:                                                                                  

5.八月十五的夜晚,天空晴朗,伸手不见五指。

                                                                                                   

     病因:                                                                                    

答案

1.“他经常”改为“小刚经常”“帮助他”改为“帮助小亮”

       指代不明

2.“神气活现”改为“精神抖擞”

       用词不当

3.删去“西瓜”

     分类不当   

4.“一个个铁球”改为“断了线的珍珠”  

      比喻不当

5.“天空晴朗,”改为“漆黑一片”

      不合事理

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