增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

3．必须按答题要求做题，否则不给分。

One day, my whole family went to climb the big hill. My father and mother

told my elder sister and I that the first one to get on the top of the hill would be

give a toy. Hear this, we began to run up. At first I kept ahead, but a few minutes

ago my sister was ahead me. However, I didn’t give up. I reached the top first in

the end. We enjoy the beautiful scenery and had a picnic on the top of the hill, I

was the most happiest one all the time, because I not only won a toy and also

learnt that one shouldn’t give up easily.