In order to improve our English, an English evening is going to held in our school dining hall. It will start from 7:30 p.m. and end at 10:00 p.m. the next Friday. You will enjoy English stories at the “evening”. Some English songs will also be singing. What’s more, some English poems and short plays will he performed, either. In addition, Mr. and Mrs. Brown from Canada, working in our school, together with his children, will be invited to our “evening”. They will give us wonderfully performances. Everybody is welcome to attending the “evening”. We hope all of you can be there on time and will appreciate the performances. We also hope your English will be greatly improve after this “evening”.
小题1:held前加be
小题2:from改为at
小题3:去掉next前的the
小题4:singing改为sung
小题5:either改为too
小题6:his改为their
小题7:wonderfully改为wonderful
小题8:attending改为attend
小题9:improve改为improved
小题1:这里应该使用被动语态。
小题2:在某个时间点应该用 at.
小题3:这里没有必要使用the;
小题4:被动语态应该使用过去分词；
小题5:either应该用于否定句中，而本句是肯定句，所以用too;
小题6:前面提到的是Brown夫妻，应该是两个人，所以用复数形式
小题7:修饰名词的应该用形容词，后面是名词performances
小题8:be welcome to do sth;是固定词组，后面用不定式。
小题9:本句是被动语态，应该用过去分词。