Welcome to school clubs

The new term is coming. For all our new students, I would like to introduce some of our clubs.

Cool Players is a good choice for sports lovers. Here you can do sports one hour a day to make you healthy and strong, and you can watch sports matches. If you are interested in books, Smart Readers is a good choice. Reading good books and writing reading notes are useful to improve your knowledge and open up your eyes. Do you want to be a volunteer? If so, you can join Happy Volunteers and take part in shows or help needy people in the city.

These are the most popular clubs in our school, and hope you can join us.

题目分析：这篇短文要求我们以所提供内容写一篇作文，即介绍三个社团的情况(包括名称、活动内容及其目的)。在题目中给了我们这篇短文的写作要点，即：每个俱乐部的主要内容。一是俱乐部名称；二是俱乐部活动内容；三是俱乐部的目的。乐善者俱乐部的活动内容与目的需要我们自己补充。主要内容虽然已经列出，但是很多内容都需要我们自己去充实，让它变得完整、合理，内容丰富，这就需要花费我们的想象力，以及我们平时积累的知识。另外，写作时，还需注意语句间的衔接，使文意连贯，表达流畅。

【亮点说明】这是一篇比较不错的作文。作者从三个方面介绍了每一个俱乐部，介绍了俱乐部的名称、活动内容和目的，层次非常的清晰。短文中需要作者自己补充的内容完成得也不错。如Do you want to be a volunteer? If so, you can join Happy Volunteers and take part in shows or help needy people in the city.等。这些内容都比较贴合文章的需要，意思也很连贯。文章中还用了一些比较好的句型，如If you are interested in books, Smart Readers is a good choice.等。