完成一篇题为“Yao Ming”的文章，但不要逐字翻译。
1.姚明，1980年出生于上海，身高2.26米；
2.九岁开始打篮球，十八岁进入国家队，22岁加入NBA打球；2011年从NBA退役，然后成为上海篮球队的老板，他让上海篮球队越来越厉害。
3.爱好：玩电脑游戏和阅读；
4.对人有礼貌、友好，是青少年的偶像，也是中国人的骄傲。
Yao Ming
Yao Ming
Yao Ming is one of the most famous and successful basketball players in the world. He was born in Shanghai, China in 1980.He is 2.26 meters tall. When he was 9 years old, he began to play basketball. Then he joined in the national team at the age of 18.When he was 22 years old, he joined NBA. After a few years, he retired from NBA in 2011. Then he became the boss of Shanghai Basketball team. He makes Shanghai basketball team better and better.
Yao Ming likes playing basketball and reading. And he is very polite and friendly to others. Young people like Yao Ming very much. He is the pride of China. I like admire him very much.
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