When Joe left university, he got a good work in a bike factory.
But after he had been worked there for some years, he decided
to have change, so he put a notice in several newspapers,
saying what experiences he had and the kind of job he would
like to have. One of the answers he accepted was from a man
was looking for a job, too. This man wrote to him, “Dear, sir,
when you get a new job, be kind enough to give your name and
address to your present boss as I have been trying to find
a position like yours for a long time.” After he reads the letter,
he suddenly realized that what he had done was real foolish.
小题1: job
小题2:去掉been
小题3: a
小题4:experience
小题5:received
小题6:去掉was
小题7: my
小题8: √
小题9:read
小题10:really
小题1: job he got a good work in a bike factory.其中work不可数， 应改成可数job.
小题2:去掉been But after he had been worked there for some years for +一段时间 ， 用完成时。而had been worked 是被动，应给为主动。去掉been
小题3: a he decided to have change,change为名词，应写have a change
小题4:experience saying what experiences he had "他有什么样的经验" 当“经验”时不可数。 应改成experience
小题5:received One of the answers he accepted accept "接受"receive "收到"这儿的翻译应为收到。所以改为 received
小题6:去掉was from a man was looking for a job, too. looking for a job 做后置定语修饰a job, 所以去掉was
小题7: my be kind enough to give your name and address to your present boss翻译为“把我的姓名和地址给你现在的老板”所以改成my
小题8: √
小题9:read After he reads the letter, 应用过去式。时态一致。所以改成read
小题10:really what he had done was real foolish.修饰形容词foolish 用副词really.