假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误, 每句最多有两处错误,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1.没处错误及修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第十一处起)不计分。
One day, did not feeling well, Mr, Smith went to the hospital to have him examined.When he was given the test paper, he greatly shocked.“Am I dying?” He immediately feels very sick. Filled with sadness, he went back home, taking a lot of pills and even wrote his will.“Maybe a doctor made a mistake”, Mr. Smith thought and went to the hospital to have other examination.To his great joy, the doctor really made a mistake but he didn’t have cancer in all! Again, the whole world seemed beautiful.Mr.Smith went out for his most favourite sport happily .
小题1:删除did
小题2:him 改成himself
小题3:feels 改成felt
小题4:shocked前面加was
小题5:taking 改成took
小题6:a 改成The
小题7:other 改成another
小题8:but 改成and
小题9:in改成 at
小题10:去掉most
小题1:分词的否定式前面宾语组动词
小题2:反身代词表示强调
小题3:全文都是过去时
小题4:形容词前面应该有系动词
小题5:连续3个动词并列都用过去式
小题6:通知那个医生
小题7:这里是指再做一个检查
小题8:上下文是顺接关系而不是转折关系
小题9:not…at all一点也不
小题10:favourite本身就是最高级