假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Li Han is a good friend of me. He made a deep impression with me the first time we met, and we became good friend. He is tall and thin. When I first met him, it is rainy and cold. He wore a white Tshirt and blue jeans, with a big smile on his face, that made him look sunny. He doesn't look very handsome, but bright. The glasses on his nose made it look bookish. When we talked I discovered that he was full of humorous. Seen that I hadn't brought a umbrella, he shared his, which made me feel warm. He seemed excellent and kind, but I was determined to learn from him.
小题1:me改为mine
小题2:with改为on
小题3:friend后加s
小题4:is改为was
小题5:that改为which
小题6:it改为him
小题7:humorous
小题8:Seen改为Seeing
小题9:a改为an
小题10:but改为and/so
小题1:我的好朋友中的一位,of后指的是my friends,所以用名词性物主代词。
小题2:have…impression on sb.为固定搭配,意为“给某人留下……的印象”。
小题3:主语为we,friend应用复数形式。
小题4:从上下文来看,该句描述的是以前的情况,所以用过去时。
小题5:代替上文描述的穿着和样子,引导一个非限制性定语从句用which。
小题6:指的是Li Han。
小题7:full of意为“充满……”,应与名词搭配。
小题8:其逻辑主语为句子的主语he,两者之间是主谓关系,所以用现在分词表示主动。
小题9:后面的单词发音以元音音素开头,所以用不定冠词an。
小题10:前面是我决心向他学习的原因,所以用连词so。也可以看作顺承关系,用and连接。