假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜钱（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My birthday is coming. Father asked me how I would want as my birthday present. I told him I need no present but a party. Father said Ok. When I recited the name of my seven friends I planned to invite, he wondered why his guest list didn’t include my new neighbor Tom. I told him about I didn’t like to be with a person whom I didn’t know well. And father insisted that I seize the chance to make new friends. In my birthday, Tom came besides my seven friends. Very quick we became good friends. From this I realized give others a chance means giving myself a chance. It was really unforgettable birthday.
小题1:how改成what
小题2:need改成needed
小题3:name改成names
小题4:his改成 my
小题5:去掉about
小题6:And改成But
小题7:In改成On
小题8:quick改成qucikly
小题9:give改成 giving
小题10:With后面加a
题目分析：
小题1:因为宾语从句缺少宾语，所以how 改成what
小题2:主句是用told从句也用过去时needed
小题3:因为有7个朋友：name 改成names
小题4:my代指作者的
小题5:tell sb+从句，去掉about
小题6:作者说不想和不熟悉的人一起，爸爸坚持要他抓住机会交新朋友，两句话是转折关系And 改成But
小题7:在某一天用on，In 改成On
小题8:用副词修饰动词：became，quick 改成qucikly
小题9:考查词组：mean doing意味做做,give改成 giving
小题10:a unforgettable birthday 一个难忘的生日。
点评：考查考生在上下文中运用语法的能力，所以先通读全文，在逐句排查错误，对于时态形容词副词和名词单复数的考查是重点。