On Saturday morning, I went in a boat trip with my big family. They got on a boat on Lamma Island. Grandpa and Dad go fishing. Uncle Billy and his family lied on the deck enjoying the sun. I played cards with my cousins happy. Suddenly, weather became very bad and it started to rain! We both felt surprised and disappointing. We decided to stop the trip. Uncle Billy invited us to pay a visit on to his home on Lamma Island. Bought some seafood, we cooked a delicious seafood dinner at Uncle Billy’s home. Although we stopped our boat trips, we still had a better time
小题1:in-into
小题2:a-the
小题3:go-went
小题4:happy-happily
小题5:weather前加the
小题6:disappointing- disappointed
小题7:去掉on
小题8:Bought-buying
小题9:trips-trip
小题10:better-good
题目分析：
小题1:in-into 固定词组go into…进入…
小题2:a-the 用the特指上文提及的boat.
小题3:go-went 本文使用的是一般过去时，故使用went。
小题4:happy-happily 用副词做状语修饰谓语动词play cards with my cousins.
小题5:weather前加the 用the特指当时的天气。
小题6:disappointing- disappointed 这里disappointed与前面的surprised相处并列关系。
小题7:去掉on 固定词组pay a visit to…参观…,这里的on是多余的。
小题8:Bought-buying 动词buy与句子的主语we之间构成主动关系，使用现在分词的形式.
小题9:trips-trip 根据上文说明就是这一次旅游。
小题10:better-good 本文没有比较级的意思。
点评：本题要求考生要特别耐心，尤其要注意句子中人称和数是否一致，时态是否一致。各种词性之间的区别以及一些常用句型，固定短语的应用。一般的这类题型不会出现太复杂的单词和句子，这类题型考察基础知识较多。平时应注重积累，熟记一些句型及惯用结构。修改前先细读短文，标出出错的位置，改完以后还得细读短文，看看改过后的短文是否语意通顺，符合逻辑。