假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧,并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线\划掉。
修改:在错词下面划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2、只允许修改10处,多者从第11处不计分
When I was elementary school student aged ten, I took part in a singing competition in our city. This was my first time to be in a singing competition. In the day of the competition, I was asked to enter into a studio room, which there was only one person and a piano. The man asks me to sing in front of the microphone, followed his piano playing. My mother was waiting for me outside the studio. I thought that I sang better at the time. So when I finished and walked out the studio, my mother asked, “What happened to your voice? Why couldn’t we hear you?” Then, I realized that I forget to switch on the microphone.
小题1: was后加 an
小题2:In the day 改为On the day
小题3:去掉into
小题4:which 改成where
小题5:asks 改成asked
小题6:followed 改成 following
小题7:better 改成well
小题8:So 改成But
小题9:out后加 of
小题10:forget 为forgot
题目分析:
小题1:elementary school student是可数名词,加不定冠词:was后加 an
小题2:在某一天用on,In the day 改为On the day
小题3:enter是及物动词,不加介词;去掉into
小题4:考查定语从句定语从句中不缺成分,which 改成where
小题5:这篇文章用的是过去时:asks 改成asked
小题6:考查现在分词做状语,I和follow是主动关系,followed 改成 following
小题7:考查形容词,这里没有和谁比较,不用比较级:better 改成well
小题8:前面说自己认为唱得很好,后面是妈妈的话,表示转折:So 改成But
小题9:walk out of走出;out后加 of
小题10:主句是I realized从句的谓语是过去式:forget 为forgot
点评:本题考查较为细致,要求考生要特别耐心答题中注意句子中人称和数是否一致,时态是否一致。各种词性之间的区别以及一些常用句型,固定短语的应用。一般的这类题型不会出现太复杂的单词和句子,这类题型考察基础知识较多。平时应注重积累,熟记一些句型及惯用结构。修改前先细读短文,标出出错的位置,改完以后还得细读短文,看看改过后的短文是否语意通顺,符合逻辑。