I eager to go to college because I know there is so many to learn about the world
and about human beings. Knowledge is source of pleasure for me. I want to study at a
college for fun to knowledge; I know college education can prepares me better for my
future. Better education mean, more often then not, better jobs, better opportunities and
better choices. I want to go to college because I know that our parents and other people
care for me will be happy with that. Unless I can study at a nice university, I will make
them happy. I’d like not let them down. That’s why I must go to college.
小题1:eager – am eager
小题2:many – much
小题3:source – a source
小题4:to knowledge – of knowledge
小题5: prepares – prepare
小题6:mean – means
小题7:our – my
小题8: people care – people who care
小题9:unless – if
小题10: not let – not to let
题目分析：
小题1:eager – am eager 形容词eager不能单独在句中做谓语部分，要和系动词be一起构成系表结构。
小题2:many – much 前面有is说明后面使用单数形式，指世界上有很多看一下的知识。
小题3:source – a source 固定搭配a source of…指一种来源…。
小题4:to knowledge – of knowledge 固定搭配for fun of…为了…的快乐。
小题5: prepares – prepare 情态动词can后面要接动词原形，一起构成谓语部分。
小题6:mean – means 前面的主语better education是不可数名词，谓语动词使用单数形式。
小题7: our – my 前面的主语是I，故后面使用my，两者保持一致。
小题8: people care – people who care 本句是一个定语从句，who指代先行词在句中做主语，不能省略。
小题9: unless – if 句意：如果我在一个好的大学里学习，我就能让他们开心。不需要使用“unless(如果…不…)”
小题10:not let – not to let 固定搭配would like to do sth想要做某事。不定式的否定是在不定式符号to前面加not即可。
点评：本题考查较为细致，要求考生要特别耐心答题中注意句子中人称和数是否一致，时态是否一致。各种词性之间的区别以及一些常用句型，固定短语的应用。一般的这类题型不会出现太复杂的单词和句子，这类题型考察基础知识较多。平时应注重积累，熟记一些句型及惯用结构。修改前先细读短文，标出出错的位置，改完以后还得细读短文，看看改过后的短文是否语意通顺，符合逻辑。