I have a good friend who’s name is Liu Mei. She is our monitor and one of the excellent student in our class. Clever as she is, but she works very hard. We have a lot on common and have a lot to talk .One evening she told me that something happened when her parents was out. She was doing her homework one Sunday morning when she smelt something burning. Look out of the window , she find a cloud of smoke coming out of her neighbor’s house . She called 119 immediate. Ten minutes late, the firemen came and put out the fire. Her neighbor was very thankful for her help.
小题1:Who’s ----whose
小题2:Student---students
小题3:去掉but
小题4:on---in
小题5:talk后加about
小题6:was---were
小题7:Look ----Looking
小题8:find---found
小题9:immediate--- immediately
小题10:late---later
题目分析：
小题1:Who’s是who is的缩写，谁的：whose
小题2:one of后面接名词复数：Student---students
小题3:Clever as she is是让步状语从句，后面应该是主句，不能用连词but
小题4:词组：have a lot in common有很多相似之处
小题5:talk是不及物动词，不定式做定语的时候后加about
小题6:主语是her parents谓语是复数were
小题7:这里是现在分词做状语：Look ----Looking
小题8:这里讲的是one Sunday morning 的事情，用过去时：find---found
小题9:修饰动词call 119用副词： immediately
小题10:late是形容词“迟的”， Ten minutes later 十分钟后
点评：本题考查较为细致，要求考生要特别耐心答题中注意句子中人称和数是否一致，时态是否一致。各种词性之间的区别以及一些常用句型，固定短语的应用。一般的这类题型不会出现太复杂的单词和句子，这类题型考察基础知识较多。平时应注重积累，熟记一些句型及惯用结构。修改前先细读短文，标出出错的位置，改完以后还得细读短文，看看改过后的短文是否语意通顺。