短文改错 (共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)
Today I was having a PE lesson while I fell down and hurt my foot.I was in great pain at that moment but I tried to act as if nothing happened until the class was over. Although I had difficulty walk back to my classroom, but I still didn't tell anyone and even refused the offer of help from my classmates. As the result, the hurt on my foot became worse.Now I know I am wrong.We can tell other our need for help and accept their help.Someday we can help him in return.In this way, we can get along with each other happy and peacefully.
小题1:while改为when
小题2:nothin后面接had
小题3:walk改为walking
小题4:去掉but
小题5:the改为a
小题6:on改为in
小题7:am改为was
小题8:other改为others
小题9:him改为them
小题10:happy改为happily
题目分析:
小题1:while改为when 连词while后面只能接延续性动词,而本题后面的fall down是一个短暂性动词,故使用when。
小题2:nothin后面接had 虚拟语气,本句是对过去发生的事情进行描述,如果as if后面的内容是假的,就使用过去完成时的形式。
小题3:walk改为walking 固定句式have some difficulty doing sth做某事有困难。
小题4:去掉but 连词although不能和but连用。
小题5:the改为a 固定搭配as a result结果是。
小题6:on改为in 介词In指在脚上。
小题7:am改为was 本句是指我知道我过去所做的事情错了,故使用一般过去时。
小题8:other改为others 本题中的others指其他人,又没有范围限制,故使用others。
小题9:him改为them 这里的them是上句的others。
小题10:happy改为happily 本句副词happily与peacefully都做状语修饰谓语动词。
点评:本题考查较为细致,要求考生要特别耐心答题中注意句子中人称和数是否一致,时态是否一致。各种词性之间的区别以及一些常用句型,固定短语的应用。一般的这类题型不会出现太复杂的单词和句子,这类题型考察基础知识较多。平时应注重积累,熟记一些句型及惯用结构。修改前先细读短文,标出出错的位置,改完以后还得细读短文,看看改过后的短文是否语意通顺,符合逻辑。