This morning I went to a nearby food store to buy some breads. After the man in the store packing the bread in a small bag for me, I began to walk home with bag in my hand. On the way I met my next-door neighbor, Miss Wang, that was walking her dog .We greeted with each other and begin to talk about the weather. As we were talking, his dog came up at the bag in my hand though the bread gave off a delicious smell. As a result, some of the bread fell to the ground or the dog began to enjoy it. Five minutes late, I was back at the store to buy bread again.
小题1:breads.改成bread
小题2:packing改成packed
小题3:with∧the
小题4:that改成who
小题5:去掉with
小题6:begin改成began
小题7:his改成her
小题8:though改成because/since/as/for
小题9:or改成and
小题10:late改成 later,
题目分析：
小题1:bread“面包”是不可数名词,不能用breads
小题2:这里用packed做谓语，packing是非谓语
小题3:with∧the，特指“我手里的包”
小题4:that改成who，这是非限制性定语从句，不能用that连接
小题5:去掉with，greet是及物动词，问候彼此：greet each other
小题6:和greeted并列用began
小题7:指代Miss Wang的狗，用her dog
小题8:因为面包发出香味，所以她的狗朝我的包走过来：though改成because/since/as/for
小题9:面包掉在地上，狗开始吃，是并列关系：or改成and
小题10:late是形容词：“迟的”， Five minutes later, 5分钟后
点评：本题考查较为细致，要求考生要特别耐心答题中注意句子中人称和数是否一致，时态是否一致。各种词性之间的区别以及一些常用句型，固定短语的应用。一般的这类题型不会出现太复杂的单词和句子，这类题型考察基础知识较多。平时应注重积累，熟记一些句型及惯用结构。修改前先细读短文，标出出错的位置，改完以后还得细读短文，看看改过后的短文是否语意通顺，