The winter holiday, when I am looking forward to, is coming. What fun it is to have sports! Play football is one of my hobby. I can also ride my bicycle, climb high mountains, or go skating. Sometime I can play the chess with Grandfather. How interested my holiday will be! But my father is always afraid I would be hurt by a truck, fall into water, and fall off a tree. He is afraid I would fight against others or taken away by bad men. But if I’m friendly and carefully enough, how will these things happen? I must try best to persuade my father.
小题1:when—which
小题2:Play—Playing
小题3:hobby—hobbies
小题4:Sometime—sometimes
小题5:去掉the
小题6:interested— interesting
小题7:and---or
小题8:or后加be
小题9:carefully—careful
小题10: try 后加my
题目分析：
小题1:when—which，考查定语从句：先行词是The winter holiday,但是定语从句中缺少宾语，用which引导非限制性定语从句。
小题2:Play—Playing，考查动名词做主语
小题3:hobby—hobbies，one of后面接可数名词复数
小题4:Sometime是某个时间，sometimes是有时
小题5:去掉the，play chess下象棋，中间不加冠词
小题6:interested一般修饰人，这里修饰holiday用interesting修饰
小题7:and---or，这是选择的关系，被卡车伤到，掉到河里或者从树上掉下
小题8:or后加be ，考查被动语态，I和take away是被动关系
小题9:carefully—careful，和friendly并列，用形容词careful
小题10: try 后加my ，try one’s best尽某人最大的努力
点评：本题考查较为细致，要求考生要特别耐心答题中注意句子中人称和数是否一致，时态是否一致。各种词性之间的区别以及一些常用句型，固定短语的应用。一般的这类题型不会出现太复杂的单词和句子，这类题型考察基础知识较多。平时应注重积累，熟记一些句型及惯用结构。修改前先细读短文，标出出错的位置，改完以后还得细读短文，看看改过后的短文是否语意通顺，