I spent most of my summer holidays travel in London. I arrived there in middle of July. After reaching my sister’s apartment I got many sleep. The next day I went to St Paul’s Cathedral, an amazing monument, that was well worth a visit. After take some photos in front of it, I moved on to the Tate Modern art gallery. There is an excellent exhibition of oil paintings and sculptures by some famous British artist. For dinner we went to the Ivy, a very beautifully restaurant. The food was good but the atmosphere was nice. It was a great day of sightseeing and one that would never be forgotten it.
小题1: travel改为traveling
小题2:many改为much
小题3:that改为which
小题4:take改为taking
小题5:is改为was
小题6:artist改为artists
小题7: beautifully改为beautiful
小题8:正确
小题9:but改为and
小题10:去掉it
题目分析：
小题1: travel改为traveling固定搭配spend some time doing sth花费时间做某事。
小题2:many改为much 名词sleep是一个不可数名词，所以使用much修饰。
小题3:.that改为which 关系代词that不能引导非限制性定语从句。
小题4:take改为taking 介词after后面要接动名词形式。
小题5:.is改为was 本文的基本时态是一般过去时，故使用was。
小题6:artist改为artists 前面有some修饰，说明后面使用复数artists的形式。
小题7:beautifully改为beautiful 修饰名词restaurant，使用形容词beautiful的形式。
小题8:正确
小题9:but改为and 上下文之间存在着并列关系，故使用and连接。
小题10:去掉it 本句是一个被动语态，动词forget的逻辑宾语就是句子的主语。
点评：本题考查较为细致，要求考生要特别耐心答题中注意句子中人称和数是否一致，时态是否一致。各种词性之间的区别以及一些常用句型，固定短语的应用。一般的这类题型不会出现太复杂的单词和句子，这类题型考察基础知识较多。平时应注重积累，熟记一些句型及惯用结构。修改前先细读短文，标出出错的位置，改完以后还得细读短文，看看改过后的短文是否语意通顺，符合逻辑。