Last term before I got the message that two of my classmates will not attend our final discussion, I cried. Undoubtedly, I am an extreme anxious person.I feel nervous if anything on my schedule will not carried out.My personality has always bothered me a lot. One thing I would like to changing is my character.I attended the lecture a few week ago. The lecturer said a sentence that left an impression on me. “I feel strongly which I can make it.”From then on, I have regarded it for my motto. I encourage myself to become a positive person who will not to be beaten by any difficulties
小题1:after-before
小题2:will-would
小题3:extreme-extremely
小题4:will not加be
小题5:changing-change
小题6:the (lecture)-a
小题7:week-weeks
小题8:which-that
小题9:for改成as
小题10:will not后去掉to
题目分析：
小题1:句意：在我知道两个同学不参加最后的讨论后，我哭了。after-before
小题2:时间是Last term 用过去将来时：will-would
小题3:extreme-修饰名词，anxious用副词extremely修饰
小题4:考查一般将来时的被动：will be done
小题5:would like to do sth想要做…
小题6:the (lecture)-a，这里泛指“一个演讲”
小题7:a few修饰名词复数：week-weeks
小题8:feel后面接的是宾语从句，宾语从句是完整的，用that引导
小题9:regard sth as把…当作是
小题10:will not后面接动词原形
点评：本题考查较为细致，要求考生要特别耐心答题中注意句子中人称和数是否一致，时态是否一致。各种词性之间的区别以及一些常用句型，固定短语的应用。一般的这类题型不会出现太复杂的单词和句子，这类题型考察基础知识较多。平时应注重积累，熟记一些句型及惯用结构。修改前先细读短文，标出出错的位置，改完以后还得细读短文，看看改过后的短文是否语意通顺，符合逻辑。