Manager,
I am an exchange student from China. Yesterday, I went to your cinema to see a film. The film was very well, but I did not enjoy it because there were some problem in the cinema.
First, the film was delayed as there were so much advertisements at the beginning. It was rather annoyed. Second, the sound of the film was too loud that I could hardly bear. The EXIT signs could not be seen clearly, which presented potential safety hazards. If something terribly should happen, it will be difficult for people to get out quickly.
As a visitor to your city, I’m disappointed with my experience in your cinema. I am writing a letter in the hope that you can consider about these problems and make more improvements.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
小题1:well--good
小题2:problem—problems
小题3:much—many
小题4:annoyed—annoying
小题5:too—so
小题6:bear后加 it
小题7:terribly—terrible
小题8:will—would
小题9:a letter—the letter
小题10:about去掉
题目分析：
小题1:well--good 本句中使用good作为表语和前面的was过程系表结构。Well通常作为副词，作为形容词的时候，只能表示“身体好”。而本句表示的是“电影好”.
小题2:problem—problems 本句前面有some修饰，说明使用可数名词的复数形式。
小题3:much—many 后面使用的是可数名词复数形式advertisements，故使用many修饰。
小题4:annoyed—annoying 本句的it是指前面一句所提及的内容，故使用形容词annoying(令人烦恼的)修饰。
小题5:too—so 固定句式so…that…如此….以至于….；too后面的不能接从句。
小题6:bear后加 it 动词bear是及物动词，后面要接宾语的it指代前面提及的the sound of the film。
小题7:terribly—terrible 本句中使用形容词terrible修饰前面的不定代词something。
小题8:will—would 本文一直叙述的都是过去所发生的事情，故使用would表示过去将来时。
小题9:a letter—the letter 本句中的the 特指所写的这封信，故使用the表示特指。
小题10:about去掉 动词consider是及物动词，后面可以直接加宾语，不需要介词about。
点评：本题考查较为细致，要求考生要特别耐心答题中注意句子中人称和数是否一致，时态是否一致。各种词性之间的区别以及一些常用句型，固定短语的应用。一般的这类题型不会出现太复杂的单词和句子，这类题型考察基础知识较多。平时应注重积累，熟记一些句型及惯用结构。修改前先细读短文，标出出错的位置，改完以后还得细读短文，看看改过后的短文是否语意通顺，符合逻辑。