Li Hua,
I feel great honored to be trusted with your personal affairs. Here is some advices for you:
First of all, you should talk to your parents or let them know where your interest is. If they know what you really want to do in the future, they are possible to change their mind. Secondly, don't worry too many about them because too much anxiety may affect your studies. Besides, you can talk to your teachers and your best friends such that they can help you to persuade your parents.
Personally, what you want to major in and what profession you would like to enter in depend on your own interest because they were part of your life. I hope you can follow my own interest and realize your dream in end.
Yours,
Wang Lei
小题1:great —> greatly
小题2:advices —> advice
小题3:or —> and
小题4:possible —> likely
小题5:many —> much
小题6:such —> so
小题7:in去掉
小题8:were —> are
小题9:my —> your
小题10:in the end
题目分析：
小题1:great 是形容词，修饰名词，这里修饰 honored用greatly
小题2:advice是不可数名词
小题3:首先，你应该和父母交谈并告诉他们你的兴趣，这是并列关系：or —> and
小题4:考查句型：Sb/sth is likely to do …，possible不能用于这个句型
小题5:too many 修饰可数名词，这里worry too much是抽象概念
小题6:so that是”为了”
小题7:enter是及物动词，不要加介词：in去掉
小题8:这篇文章用的是一般现在时：were —> are
小题9:句意：我希望不能按照自己的兴趣，my —> your
小题10:考查词组：in the end最后
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