My heart was beating fast when I start to make the speech. I had prepared very good but it was the first time for me to speak to so many student in the public. So I was very nervous when I began to speak. Luckily, the whole room was so quietly that I could easily make myself hear. After a while I became confident than before. Everyone listened carefully. I could see from our eyes that I was doing a good job. As soon as I finished speak, the students applauded. How an unforgettable experience!
小题1:start改为started
小题2:good 改为 well
小题3:student 改为students
小题4:去掉in the public 中的the
小题5:quietly 改为quiet
小题6:hear 改为heard
小题7:confident 前加more
小题8:our 改为their
小题9:speak 改为speaking
小题10:How 改为What
题目分析：
小题1:发生在过去的事情，故用一般过去时。
小题2:需要用副词修饰动词prepared。
小题3:many修饰可数名词复数，所以student 改为students。
小题4:in public是固定用法，意思是当众。
小题5:用形容词作表语。
小题6:这里想说“使我自己被听到”，所以hear 改为heard。
小题7:根据than，所以confident 前加more。
小题8:这里想说我可以从他们的眼睛中看出，所以our 改为their。
小题9:作宾语，所以speak 改为speaking。
小题10:experience是名词，所以How 改为What 。
点评：答题中注意句子中人称和数是否一致，时态是否一致。各种词性之间的区别以及一些常用句型，固定短语的应用。一般的这类题型不会出现太复杂的单词和句子，这类题型考查的就是我们的基础知识。平时应注重积累，熟记一些句型及惯用结构。