假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌的作文如下。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或者修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处)不计分。
One day, I was cooking in the kitchen as the telephone rings. I went to answer it immediately. She was my close friend, Lisa. When we were talking on a phone, the fire alarm sounded. I ran back to the kitchen. The room full of smoke and the beef was badly burnt. I quickly turned off the gases, opening all the window, and then went out of the house. In my surprise, two fire engines were outside my house. I was rather worried. I told about the firemen that it was my careless cooking which caused the heavy smoke.
小题1:as→ when
小题2:rings→rang
小题3:She→It
小题4:a→the
小题5:The room ∧full of→was
小题6:opening→opened
小题7:window→windows
小题8:In→To
小题9:told about →去掉about
小题10:which→that
题目分析:本文叙述了作者在做饭时去接电话,导致厨房满是浓烟。作者正接电话时,听见了警报,跑到厨房一看,厨房满是烟,牛肉也烤焦了。他忙打开所有的窗户。令人惊讶的是,有两辆消防车来到了他的家外面。他向消防队员解释说正是自己做饭粗心导致了浓烟。
小题1:考查连词。根据I was cooking in the kitchen 可知我正在做饭,此处应是正在这时电话想了。When正在这时,as表示伴随,同时发生。故此处应用连词when。
小题2:考查动词。根据was cooking可知故事发生在过去,因此此处用过去时,故此处用动词过去式rang。
小题3:考查代词。在不知道打电话的人的性别时用代词it来代指任何人。故此处用代词it。
小题4:考查冠词。talk on the phone 打电话。这是动词短语故此处用定冠词the。
小题5:考查动词。连词and连接相同成分,and后是一个完整的句子,所以and前也应是一个完整的句子。The room full of smoke是独立主格结构不是句子,因此改为句子在full前加动词was。
小题6:考查动词。
小题7:考查名词。由all来修饰,故此处window用复数形式windows。
小题8:考查介词。 动词 turned与 went和opening是通过and来连接的并列谓语,故此处应用opened。
小题9:考查介词。To one’s surprise令某人惊讶的是。故此处用介词to。
小题10:考查强调句。It is/was+强调的内容+that+剩余的部分。it was my careless cooking which caused the heavy smoke.根据句意正是做饭粗心导致了浓烟。故此处用连接词that。