I’m good at singing. I’ve been interested in music and dreamed of become a singer ever since my childhood. My parents began to teach me children’s songs until I was only three. After I started school I had more chances to enjoy various song, such as folk songs and popular songs, and practicing singing a lot. I like singing English songs as well, which greatly benefits me in my learning of English.
Practice makes perfectly. I have made great progress in singing and my efforts have paid for. Last year, I take part in a talent show and won prize.I think everyone is unique and has our advantages in some respects. I know my singing skills still need to be improved. But I’m confidence that I will serve our society with my songs in the future.
小题1:become 改为becoming
小题2:until 改为 when
小题3:Various song 改为Various songs
小题4:practicing 改为practiced
小题5:perfectly 改为perfect
小题6:paid for改为pay off
小题7:take part in 改为 took part in
小题8:prize 前加 a
小题9:our 改为 his 或者her
小题10:confidence 改为confident
题目分析:文章介绍作者从小喜爱唱歌,学习唱歌,经常练习,最后他的努力有了回报,在才艺大赛中获奖,希望自己能用自己的歌声服务社会。
小题1:dream of后面接动名词:become 改为becoming
小题2:句意:当我三岁的时候,父母就教我唱歌。until 改为 when
小题3:Various 各种各样的,后面接可数名词复数。song songs
小题4:和had并列的谓语动词,用一般过去式practiced
小题5:Practice makes perfect是谚语,熟能生巧。perfectly 改为perfect
小题6:paid for是为…付钱, pay off有回报,
小题7:因为是去年的事情,所以用一般过去式:take part in 改为 took part in
小题8:prize 是可数名词,泛指“获了一个奖”,前加 a
小题9:句意:每个人都是独特的,每个人都有自己的优点,用his 或者her指代everyone’s。
小题10:句意:我很自信可以用我的歌曲服务社会。Be后面接形容词:confidence 改为confident