When I first learned to write in English，I ran into much difficulties. The main problem was in that I always thought in Chinese and tried to translate anything into English. My teacher advised me to keep my diary. I followed her advice and should put down 100 words or so each day. Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was learning to express me in simple English. One day I wrote a little story and showed to my teacher. She liked it very much and reads it to the class. All said the story was a good one. Their word were a great encouragement to me.
小题1:much改为many
小题2:in改为that
小题3:anything改为everything
小题4:my改为a
小题5:去掉should
小题6:talk改为talking
小题7:me改为myself
小题8:show后面接it
小题9:reads改为read
小题10:word改为words
题目分析：短文改错要注意句子中人称和数是否一致，时态是否一致。各种词性之间的区别以及一些常用句型，固定短语的应用。要从细节着手，在平时要多积累。
小题1:much改为many 后面的名词difficulties使用的是复数形式，故使用many修饰，much不能修饰可数名词复数形式。
小题2:in改为that 本句中的that引导的是一个表语从句，that在句中不充当任何成分。In是多余的。
小题3:anything改为everything 代词anything通常用于疑问句和否定句中。而本句是一个肯定句，使用everything。
小题4:my改为a 固定搭配keep a diary写日记。不需要使用My来修饰名词。
小题5:去掉should 本句中的put down与前面的keep是并列关系，不需要使用should。
小题6:talk改为talking 固定搭配enjoy doing sth喜欢做某事。Enjoy后面接动名词doing的形式。
小题7:me改为myself 表达自己的意思使用express oneself。使用反身代词作为express的宾语。
小题8:show后面接it 固定搭配show sth to sb="show" sb sth向某人展示某物。It指代a little。
小题9:reads改为read 动词read是一个不规则动词，过去式和过去分词都使用read。
小题10:word改为words 本句中的words指他所说的话，与后面的were保持一致都使用复数形式。