Last year, my school organized table tennis competition for all fourth-year students. I had never played on a proper table tennis court ago, or against such good players. In the first match I was against Wang Peng, who uses a special bat to hit the balls really hard. It came over the net so fast that he hardly saw it. I never stopped running and jumping, and soon I was out of my breath and had very little energy leaving. 1 was sure if Wang Peng would easily beat me, but then, sudden, he stopped. He received an injury to his right ankle, but he needed treatment from the school nurse. I won!
小题1:table前加a
小题2:ago改为before
小题3:use改为used
小题4:balls改为ball
小题5:he 改为 I
小题6:去掉my
小题7:leavingn改为left
小题8:if改为that 或者去掉if
小题9:sudden改为suddenly
小题10:but改为and 或者so
题目分析:
小题1:table前加a 文中第一次提到 用冠词a
小题2:ago改为before ago 用于一般过去时,在本文before 用于过去完成时。
小题3:use改为used 本句中前后时态保持一致。
小题4:balls改为ball 用球拍来使劲的拍打球,应该是单数。
小题5:he 改为 I 前后人称保持一致。
小题6:去掉my 固定短语,out of breath 上气不接下气。
小题7:leaving改为left 句意为我上气不接下气,没有力气了。分词做后置定语。
小题8:if改为that 或者去掉if 宾语从句引导词,根据句意是陈述句,故用that来引导或者省略。
小题9:sudden改为suddenly suddenly 突然地 副词。
小题10:but改为and 或者so 并列连接。