In autumn of 1935, when I was a young man, I was traveling in the north of Indian. One evening, before hunting in the forest all day, I was returning to the place which I had put up my tent. It was getting dark, but I was walking along a road. Suddenly I saw two eye glaring at me from among the trees. How could I do? Should I jump into the river to save my life? Then I look to the right. In the river there had a big crocodile waiting to welcome me with its mouth was wide opening.
小题1:In后加 the
小题2:Indian-India
小题3:before-after
小题4:in ∧which 或which改为where
小题5:but-and
小题6:eye –eyes
小题7:How-What
小题8:Look-looked
小题9:had-was
小题10:去掉was
题目分析：这篇文章主要讲了我年轻时，在野外露营的一次惊险的经历。
小题1:这里表示特指，故In后加 定冠词the。
小题2:这里想说我正在印度的北部旅行，所以Indian-India 。
小题3:这里想说一天傍晚，我在森林里打猎了一整天之后，我回到了搭建帐篷的地方，所以before-after。
小题4:这里含有一个定语从句，且关系词在从句中作地点状语，故in ∧which 或which改为where 。
小题5:这里想说天黑了，我正沿着一条路走。是并列关系，不是转折关系，所以but-and 。
小题6:根据two，可知这里要用复数形式，所以eye –eyes 。
小题7:do要和What进行搭配，所以How-What。
小题8:这件事情发生在过去，故用一般过去时，所以Look-looked 。
小题9:there要和be动词搭配，所以had-was。
小题10:with its mouth wide opening是独立主格结构，所以去掉was。