When I was in high school, most of my friend had bicycles. I hoped I could also have it. One day I saw a second-hand bicycle, that was only one hundred yuan. I asked my father the money. But he said he could only give me half of the money. He should find the other half myself. So I went to sell newspapers after the school. My father was pleasing when I showed him the money a month after. He gives me the other fifty. You can imagine how much happy I was when I rode to school on my own bicycle.
小题1:friend 加S.
小题2:it 改为one
小题3:that改为which
小题4:my father后加for
小题5:He 改为I
小题6:after the school去掉the.
小题7:pleasing 改pleased
小题8:after改gave
小题9:gives改gave
小题10:much删掉。
小题1:friend 加S. 考查名词。句意：当我上高中时，许多的朋友有自行车。Most of 后面加名词的复数形式。
小题2:it 改为one 考查代词。句意：我希望能有一辆。One 指同一类中的不同个。It代指同一内容。
小题3:that改为which 考查定语从句。句意：有一天我看到一辆二手自行车，它只卖100元。Which代指a second-hand bicycle，这是非限制性定语从句，故不用that.
小题4:my father后加for 考查介词。 句意：我要求父亲给我买。Ask sb for sth，向某人索要某物。
小题5:He 改为I 考查人称代词。句意：我必须得负担另外一半的钱。提到是我而不是父亲。
小题6:after the school去掉the. 考查固定短语。After school放学后。
小题7:pleasing 改pleased 考查形容词。句意：我的父亲很高兴当我一个月后给他钱时。修饰人用pleased。
小题8:after改为later. 考查固定搭配。A month later,一个月后。
小题9:gives改gave 考查时态。整体文章用一般过去时来讲述，用改成一般过去时。
小题10:much删掉。 考查感叹句。句意：你能想象当我自己骑车去学校时有多么快乐吗.how +形容词+主语+谓语，感叹句的构成。