问题 改错题

文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处,错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(/\),并在该句下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

My grandfather and I enjoy fishing. One Sunday morning we go fishing at a lake. We took ours fishing poles and headed for the lake. As soon as we arrived, so we dropped the lines into the water. Before waiting for about half an hour, I was beginning to get impatiently. I wanted to give up, and my grandfather told me to wait a little longer. Finally, there were a sudden pull at the pole and fish was caught . Within the next few minute, my grandfather also caught a fish. Felt hungry, we built a fire by the lake and barbecued the fish. It was delicious.

答案

小题1:go—went

小题2:ours— our

小题3:去掉we前面的so

小题4:before—after

小题5:impatient—impatiently

小题6:and-but

小题7:were—was

小题8:fish前加a

小题9:minute—minutes

小题10:felt—feeling

题目分析:文章介绍作者和爷爷周日早晨钓鱼的事情,中间作者有点不耐烦,爷爷让他坚持,结果他们钓到一条大鱼,吃到美味的鱼肉。

小题1:时态上下文前后不一致,根据文意周日早晨钓鱼是发生过的事情所以应该用一般过去时。

小题2:名词性物主代词和形容词性物主代词的用法。名词性物主代词ours 不能再与名词连用,而后面的fishing poles是名词,修饰名词与名词连用用形容词性物主代词our。

小题3:从属连词。 上文有as soon as 引导从句,则后一句话为主句不用引导词。连词多用。

小题4:介词 before和after错误。根据句意应该是等了大约半小时之后而不是之前。

小题5:副词与形容词混用。系表结构的表语一般用形容词而不能用副词做表语。get为系动词后面要用形容词 impatient做表语。

小题6:并列连词的误用。 上句话是想放弃与下文的爷爷让我再等等之间是转折关系而不是顺接,所以and改成but。

小题7:主谓一致。There be 句型是就近一致原则,离be动词近的是a sudden poll 为单数,所以be动词用 was 而不用were。

小题8:冠词。这里的fish是一条鱼是可数名词,可数名词单数前要加冠词a。fish 单复数同形,但是是可数名词需加冠词。下文的“caught a fish”有提示。

小题9:名词单复数。根据句意接下来的几分钟,minute是可数名词好几分钟要用复数形式。

小题10:非谓语动词。非谓语动词feel的逻辑主语是we(我们)是主动感觉,所以非谓语用现在分词feeling表示主动含义。

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