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写作题
上周五你乘坐339路公交车回家，看到了”一心只为他人着想”的感人一幕。请按下面表格提示的内容写一篇110词左右的短文。要求叙述清楚、故事完整、语法正确，书写整齐、干净。
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答案
Last Friday I took NO.399 home .On the way home, we found a moving story happening.
An old man who had heart problem was lying on the road. An woman was very worried and was crying for help. The driver found this,then he stopped the bus,and asked the passenagers to get off. Hewanted to take the old man to hospital quickly. All the passenagers agree to save the old man first. They helped the driver move the old man onto the bus. Luckily , the old man was sent to the hospital in time , he was saved by the doctor. All the people are moved because of the driver and the passenagers’ action. If we all give our love to others,the world will be more beautiful.
题目分析：这是一篇利用表格的给材料作文。主要用到一般现在时和过去时态。
【亮点说明】这篇短文能根据所给提示清晰的表达要点。能合理的应用连词。故事完整、语法正确。