My grandmother is a village woman. She is already in her seventy. Although she received little school education, but she is aware that knowledge is of great important lo young people. When my father was young, my grandmother took care him so that my father could cast more time on his studies. Now, she often encouraged me to study hard. This summer she was bad ill in bed. When I visited her during the summer holiday,I found her silting in bed, made new shoes for me!
I was so deeply moving that tears came to my eyes. My grandmother is so a kind and hardworking woman. I’ ll respect and love her forever.
小题1:seventy--- seventies
小题2:But去掉
小题3:important --- importance
小题4:took care of
小题5:cost--- spend
小题6:encouraged--- encourages
小题7:bad --- badly
小题8:made---making
小题9:moving---moved
小题10:so --- such
题目分析：
小题1:70岁应该说in her seventies。
小题2:although与but不能连用，所以But去掉。
小题3:of 之后用名词。
小题4:took care of是固定用法，意思是照料，照看。
小题5:spend …on sth.是固定用法，意思是在某事上花（金钱或时间等）。
小题6:表示现在的情况或状态，用一般现在时，所以encouraged--- encourages。
小题7:用副词修饰形容词。
小题8:“她”和“做新鞋”之间是主动关系，故用现在分词，所以made---making。
小题9:-ed修饰人，所以moving---moved。
小题10:so之后接形容词，such之后接名词，所以so --- such。
