短文改错。
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中
共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Sir,
How are you? As a exchange student, I am writing to tell you I would prefer to move into a
single room in next term, as I find it inconvenient to share a room with others. My roommate
often held parties at night, made much noise. Besides, his friends are always visiting him, that
disturbs me a lot. So I hope to draw your attentions to this problem. If you think in my position,
I am sure he will agree that the only solution for me is get a room of my own, one not in the same
building and as near to the school campus as possible. I would be gratefully if you could do me
the favor.
Best wishes.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
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Dear Sir,
How are you? As a exchange student, I am writing to tell you I would prefer to move into a single room
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in next term, as I find it inconvenient to share a room with others. My roommate often held parties at night,
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made much noise. Besides, his friends are always visiting him, that disturbs me a lot. So I hope to draw your
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attentions to this problem. If you think in my position, I am sure he will agree that the only solution for me
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is∧get a room of my own, one not in the same building and as near to the school campus as possible. I would
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be gratefully if you could do me the favor.
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Best wishes.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming