短文改错 。
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加,删除或修改某个单词。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下面划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意:
1 . 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I'm middle school student, I like to make friend with people and always try my
best to get along with them. And last week I happened to hear one of my classmate
speaking ill of me with others behind my back, it made me very sad. She said what
I was fat and acted as stupid as a bear. I had been kind to her, but why did she
laughed at my appearance? I was much hurt. I really wish I could succeed in lose
weight in just a few days. But, anyhow, no one have the right to laugh at others
whatever beautiful she is.
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I'm ︿ middle school student, I like to make friend with people and always try my
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best to get on with them. And last week I happened to hear one of my classmate speaking
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ill of me with others behind my back, it made me very sad. She said what I was fat and
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acted as stupid as a bear. I had been kind to her, but why did she laughed at my
7. laugh
appearance? I was much hurt. I really wish I could succeed in lose weight in just a few
8. losing
days. But, anyhow, no one have the right to laugh at others whatever beautiful she is.
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