短文改错

     假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共

有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.

注意:

1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.

Dear Sir,

     How are you? As a exchange student,I am writing to tell you I would prefer to move into a single

room in next term,as I find it inconvenient to share a room with others. My roommate often held parties

at night, made much noise. Besides, his friends are always visiting him, that disturb me a lot. So I hope

to draw your attentions to this problem. If you think in my position,I am sure he will agree that the only

solution for me is get a room of my own,one not in the same building but as near to the school campus

as possible. I would be gratefully if you could do me the favor.

Best wishes.

                                                                  Yours sincerely,

                                                                        Li Ming

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