Growing up is not easy.Sometimes all that is need is someone to rely on.

                                                              1. needed

For many years, she it was Mum.My mother was a career woman and has  her

                         2. it                                                                        3. had

own problems to take care∧, but when I needed her, she was always  there.Her

                                        4. of

strength came from anywhere.I don't quite know, somewhere very deep.

                            5. somewhere

She was so strong that she would never break down, even while(though/if) I

                                                                                       6. when

went to her with all my littleboy problems and shout at her.

                                                                7. shouted

Her strength made me stronger and gave to me courage to try things  other others

                                                        8.  去掉                                  9. others

thought were impossible.A helping hand is always stronger enough to lift you up.

                                                                        10. strong